HAAAAAAAAAA seid a fire skeleton a beam blasted past another skeleton he had 2 scars on his head
HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA YELLED the FIRE skeleton(wisp) as he chared the skeleton GASTERRRR YELLED THE wisp again and he punched him across the fass.
gaster went into a wall grrrrr mumbled gaster he teleport to the wisp and did a heavy punch to the gut and the wisp got really wondid and gaster disappeared
The wisp yelled DAM TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT
A as he said that a portal apart, info of him 4 more wisp came out of the portal and helped him up.
Where did he go? Seid one of the wisps
Dont kown porton(the 2nd wisp) seid Zero(the one who fort G#$%SR)
Next time we will help seid shellot(the 3nd wisp)
We sod of ben there with you seid roy (the 4th wisp)
DAMIT YELLED wolf(The 5th wisp)
Then an explosion happened to be conclude (:
Wow Axl, what an amazing story. I love how you have so much action going on. I hate how you have left us on a cliff hanger. I wonder what will happen now that there has been an explosion?
ReplyDeleteI would really love it if you could read back through and see if you can add capital letters and full stops. This makes it easier for us to read the story.
Do you plan on writing more? I really hope you are!
Hi Axl
ReplyDeleteGreat story! I can see you got your inspiration from Undertale. Its awesome to see all this action going on so the reader is never bored. Next time try to check your spelling, capital letters and punctuation.