Tuesday, 21 April 2020

UNDERWISP PART 3 OVERHAUL

Everyone went through the portal to a forest ´ok this way´ seid Roy Shallot was piggybacking zero because he was too wounded to walk.
Then a yellow engy beam shot blast Porton and Wolf and hit roy.
AAAAAAAA!!! Roy yelled in pain he had a holl in his chest he put his hand over the holl in his chest then another one can at wolf but he blocked it then a snow person came to shellot at a bick of a eye and punch him really far and he dropped zero inamidare and shellot back hit a tree but zero went into a meadow of flowers and the snow person went up to zero and grabbed him.
´You really are a weck ´seid the snow person he dropped him and turn round and blocked porton punch and the snow peson punch back but porton ducked then roy came flying in and kicked him in the face and he went in to a tree then wolf can beside the snow person and kicked him up then roy went up to him a kick him sideways then porton jump up to kicked him back down ¨I'M DONE PLAYING NOW¨seid the snow person he stated to put his hands in the ground then rock spikes came out of the ground ´LOOK OUT´ seid Porton everyone jumped out of the way ´wat weres zero´ seid roy look over there shellot had Zero on his back he put zero down out of harm's way and jumped into the snow person and did a flurry of punches to his back and grabbed his legs and spined him ronde into the army but the snow person recovered and was floating in the ary. 
´Who are you´seid Wolf
¨I'm Overhaul¨ said the snow person ok good now o will know your name when i kill you seid Wolf overhaul came back to the ground ¨YOUR ALL DEAD!¨ Yelled overhaul then rock can flying to word porton wolf shellot and roy they all jumped into the ary
¨Want that attack was to slow¨ seid Zero in his mind as he watches ¨wat………..MOVE IT A TRAP!!!!!!¨ YELLED Zero spikes came came up to all of them except Zero
They all just dodged the attack from below wolf and porton got bosted down by shellot and roy
Overhaul doged proton and wolf attack then overhaul looked over to shellot and shellot had his one of his arms out with a yellow energy ball in it WILD CANNON YELLED shellot and he punched the ball of energy and a beam came out and blasted towards overhaul and he jumped over the beam but he got kicked back down into the beam by wolf overhaul went into a tree ¨you FOOLS¨seid overhaul and he stated to have weird black lines on him YOUR DONE NOW WWWWWWWWWW YELLED overhaul TO BE CONTINUED

1 comment:

  1. Oh my goodness Axl, this is a great piece of writing both plot and detail as well as spelling and punctuation! Did you use voice typing today?

    I wish I could make rock spikes come out of the ground like Snow Person.

    I was wondering, what adjectives could you add to your writing? Could you describe the forest or the potion?

    I was also wondering, could you draw a picture to go with your story? I know you are a great artist and I would love to see how you visualise this story.

    Keep up the great work!

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