Tuesday, 21 April 2020
how to brush you teeth staring Axl (:
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Kia ora Axl, great job with writing out your instructions for brushing your teeth. I really like how you have numbered them off so we know what steps to take.
ReplyDeleteI really love how you have used time connectives and illustrations (toothbrush). What are some adverbs or imperative verbs could you use to add the instructions to make them more clear.
Keep up your great work Axl!