Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 16 April 2020
how to make you bed staring Axl
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Hi Axl,
ReplyDeleteGreat job on writing your instructions for making your bed. I love how you have them in chronological order and that you have used time connectives (e.f. first, seconds, after). I wonder, what materials would you need to have ready when making your bed?
Next time, I would love to see capital letters.
Did you try following your own instructions? Did they work?