Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 15 October 2019
im back with a story
but i had Surgery and i had it on the Friday the 13 on September.
so let me tell you this story.....
i going to the Exciting parts we i was staring to go to sleep in the Surgery room and one of Doctor said to see how mentey secinse i cod get up to so i counted... 1.... 2..... 3..... 4.....5...6....10 sec later 16 and gone i fell a sleep and your wondering wiy did you get Surgery and it was on my Hernia i wack up in a bed and i wasssssssssss so surprises that i was over i bicked and it was over but i had to becerfall for 8 WEEKSSSSSSS but so far im at the 4 week and i feal sow mack difrit and i mit not post in a wayll byyyy
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Hi Axl,My name is Chelsy from Owairaka District school. I'm a student in Room 23. I love your story about your Holiday, Next time you can start with a capital letter, and put some full stops between your Sentences. GOOD JOB
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Chelsy
Hey Axl Great story know I realise that I actually asked how it went. This is really cool story that is humour's and interesting. I really like how you did this blog post because it is just amazing and that is all I can say. Maybe next time check your punctuation and vocabulary but this is just a really cool post.
ReplyDeleteHave you ever had anything else happen to you like this before?