Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 21 May 2021
4 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Axl, I’m Jackson from NBC. I really like your Blog post. I liked the way you used images to match the story. This reminded me of when I was actually reading Maui and the sun. Next time you could use more detail and have a description.
ReplyDeleteHow did you make this?
by using lego maui
Deleteoh thats cool
DeleteHi axl I really like your story. It is funny and cool.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could make it more structured.
Do you like stories.