Wednesday, 1 July 2020

japan poam/hikcos


1.
My roses are red 
Sun-flo-wer are ve-ry bright 
Vio-lets are blue to
2.
It is cold out-side
I hide un-der my soft bed
i am real-ly cold
3.
I watch the leaves fall
It is rea-lly warm today
I like the sun-set
4.
I hide un-der trees
I run round the trees for fun
The heat is too much
5.
Everything is fun
I am Ax-l who are you?
I have lots of friends

the hikcos are kinda hard to make.

1 comment:

  1. Wow Axl,
    These Haikus are terrific. My favourite is
    My roses are red
    Sunflowers are very bright
    Violets are blue too.
    It is so creative, it has a fun twist of an different poem.
    I hope you had fun writing them.
    From Jennah

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