Wednesday, 10 June 2020

the start of my story.....called

´there is a change in history´seid %%&^ ´and i did not do it....´.
Timeline 13......´HAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA´yelled Zero as he cut Zamasu in half then he unfused ´what the hell?!´seid Dust then Proton began to pummall Dust into the ground then Proton kicked Dust into a tree ´GRRRRRRRRRRR´seid Dust.
´Everything is fine here´seid &%$$#
Timeline 23...
 this is a sneck peck at my new story it is call.. INTERLOOPERS i have not fin it yet so look out for it!





its coming out son
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6 comments:

  1. Miss Holland12 June 2020 at 18:31

    Hey Axl

    I love your snippet of your story. It is very captivating. I really like how you have included the correct capital letters for names of people. All you need to do is check for commas and full stops.

    Great work Axl!

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  2. Anonymous17 June 2020 at 13:40

    cool AXl just woundering is Dust made of Dust cool creativity

    -Trin/the coolest person in the world

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    1. Anonymous18 June 2020 at 13:55

      ok trin dust is not made of dust ok hes a bad guy not dust okkkkkkkkkk

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  3. Axl number 218 June 2020 at 13:48

    YOOOOOOOOO this looks really cool im ready when it comes out!

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  4. Anonymous25 June 2020 at 13:43

    boy good job and its is a good one???????? fjrngj

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