Tuesday, 16 June 2020

interloopers SNIP 2


has the same one´hay sans´seid Cross´THAT HEART LOCKET DOESN'T PELONE TO YOU´seid Chara.
this one is a bit short ok
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8 comments:

  1. Anonymous16 June 2020 at 10:29

    Hi Axl,
    I like you snippet!
    Why have you chosen this part of the story?
    I cant wait to see all of the story!

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  2. Axl number 217 June 2020 at 13:42

    wow this looks really cool snip of interloopers this looks really cool

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  3. Anonymous18 June 2020 at 13:50

    Hi Axl its Jacko I like your snippet I know your story is very long I can't wait to see it

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  4. Anonymous22 June 2020 at 13:33

    Hi Axl,
    awesome story.
    can't wait to read more.
    Don't forget that Interloopers is a title, so always give it a capital letter.
    I really like the names in your story.
    From Jennah

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  5. Anonymous22 June 2020 at 13:35

    Hey Axl,
    This sounds great.
    Please show me more when its done!
    Why have you chosen this topic for your narrative?

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    1. Anonymous25 June 2020 at 13:33

      i really like mayhem in fights and i really like how anime people fight its just cool =)

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  6. Anonymous25 June 2020 at 13:47

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  7. Anonymous25 June 2020 at 13:48

    1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 yeet

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