Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 5 May 2020
UNDERWISP PART 8 the outbust
´give up your down a man´seid roy´or are we´seid a Voice Behind them they all trude rond and sor dust standing on a hill.
Proton flu up to dust but dust hit him really hard in the gut´damit´seid roy as he run up to dust to fight him but helix got in the way so roy and helix fot shellot went for gaster but he got hit by a red beam.
Porton and shellot cod not fight wolf gamma and zero were left ather than roy fighting helix
´ok gamma me and you will fight gaster and wolf roy vod need some help´seid zero but then a HUGE BOOM happen everyone was hit…...then the dust cleared everyone was fine ´everyone group´ up seid zero then a pink spear hit roy in the gut ¨ROY!!!!!!!!!´yelled shellot then roy fell back shellot quickly went over to roy and got the spear out of him.
´Your bleeding really ba ba bad but i can heal you´ seid shellot then a blast went thru shellots sholleder ´AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!´yelled shellot then dust went up to proton and started punching him even tho proton cod not fight back wolf was hit by a red beam and it really injured him. Then gamma was to injured to fight to so dust hit gamma with a energy blast
´your next zero´seid gaster …………………………. Zero was silent´where's your happy self now´ zeros power start to grow.
Wind start to a lot more stronger´you you´seid zero he began to clench his fists ´i i i will make you all SUFFER´seid zero a yellow spark went arond him and his power was sky rocking´WAT IS THIS POWER¨yelled helix then a lightning storm happen then zero went yellow fire for a sec then a yellow arua went arond him´YOUR DEAD THIS TIME¨yelled zero then he went yellow fire and his power was sky rocking agen but even higher.
everone look at zero.
Zero Teleported to gaster and punch him in the fase and gaster went flying everyone was amazd then at light speed zero punched dust and helix in the gut and he went up to dust and punch him arond then zero punch dust really far then zero shot a HUGE yellow energy beam at dust.
Dust but his hands and tryed to block it but BOOM dust was gone and everyone had got healed by shallot some how To be continued
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Hi Axl you really are liking your writing at the moment great stuff. Just remember captial letters for names.
ReplyDeleteHey Axl,
ReplyDeleteWhat another great chapter! I am really hoping these characters can get to safety soon! I wonder what will happen next.
I would really like you to use capital letters for names. This shows that they are important just like you Axl.
I would love to see you create a book cover for your story. Do you think you could make one and post it to your blog?
Hi Axl,
ReplyDeleteI love reading these stories. It is always fun to comment on them to.
I can not wait to find out what happens next.
From Jennah