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Wednesday, 20 May 2020
the little shoe maker summary
then a lady in a yellow dress came and look at one of the red high heels then little shoe maker grabbed the high heel and was about to give it to her but then a red shoe van came to the other side of the rond.
a man with a black suit came out of the van and parked and copied the little shoe makers high heel and made it look a lot better then the lady went over to the red van a was about to buy won of the copied shoe.
then the little shoe maker came out to the lady with the red high heel then then the person with a black suit clicked a button and then 50% of sighs were popping on his van the lady ran to buy a copied high heel and she bought it.
The little shoe maker was sad but the black suit guy had a evil grin…
Later that night the little shoe maker was working hard to make a new shoe and it took a long time to make but when it was done it was perfect.
In the morning the little shoe maker put the shoe in the window for pepall to buy it then the guy in a black suit copied that and turned it even better then the little shoe makers!
´o come on´said the little shoe maker to himself.
Later that night the little shoe maker got a letter for the copyer and it said´you can give up now will you let me have your store´seid the letter and his name was signed on one side of the page the little shoe maker was about to sigh it then his shoe friends had bucket of gold pain and a brave shoe ready to be died.
The next morning the little shoe maker went up to the guy in a black suit and gave him the shoe then he put on the golden shoes then little shoe maker was sad then the shoes were taking over his feet and he ran of
Then end
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this summary is really good Axl number one
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