You should buy my Chromebook because It has the newest features
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 2 August 2019
AXLS CHROMEBOOK SALE (0^0)
You should buy my Chromebook because It has the newest features
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I love the faces{0^0} and {o_o}.
ReplyDeleteSo are you saying that I will have my Chromebook.
Do spell check most words are wrong
Do you have one Chromebook have a cool case?
Hi Axl I am Sree from Marshland School, I really liked how you added pictures of the Chromebooks.
ReplyDeleteThis reminded me from when I got my Chromebook It was super fun because I got to pick which one I got and I got a good one.
Next time, you could fix your spelling.Because you had quite a lot of mistakes
What Chromebook is yours if you know please reply to my comment because I really want to know. But it was awesome.
Hi my name is max
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because you like chromebook.
Did you know I like chromebooks because you can do coding and play games..
Next time, you could have more words.
Why did you have love pictures?
Kia Ora, my name is Patrick and I am from Owairaka District School. I really liked your post on The Chromebook Sale so your saying you are selling your Chromebooks for how much? because I might buy one 😉.
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your blog.
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Hi Axl I am from rawhiti school and I thought that this post was great but could use some improving with the spelling, I recommend making sure that you double check your writing and if your not sure how it is spelt then ask a adult or friend
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